Thursday, February 11, 2010

Leads Exercise 3

Last week's golf course drowning has been ruled an accidental death by San Mateo County coroner, Robert Foster. According to Foster, 34-year-old Laura Jessica Smythe's autopsy consisted with that of an accidental drowning. Smythe's body was found last week in a Pacifica golf course by a local hiker.
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  1. AnonymousFebruary 16, 2010 at 2:58 PM

    That first sentence is your lead; make the rest your second paragraph.

    * It happened last month, not last week (always double check your facts)
    * Smythe's autopsy showed she died of accidental drowning.

    0/10 - fact error, please revise

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